Monday 14 August 2023

[No. 1,125] Small changes

Important ones!

And, oh ... hello, poetry fans[1], and I've been making small changes to my BIG poem[1], and, oh ... hello, poetry fans[2], and there's no rest ...[1], and I've been making small changes to my BIG poem[2], and after the exhaustion, after you've recovered ... you've got to go back, oh yes, and look again[1], and there's no rest ...[2], and unless ... you're not really serious[1], and after the exhaustion, after you've recovered ... you've got to go back, oh yes, and look again[2], and ... are you?[1], and unless ... you're not really serious[2], and, me, me, me ...[1], and ... are you?[2], and I'm just saying ... ... ...[1], and, me, me, me ...[2], and, listen ... I seriously want to fight the chaos of the cold world ... and I want my own reality to be supreme[1], and I'm just saying ... ... ...[2], and it's hard, but ...[1], and, listen ... I seriously want to fight the chaos of the cold world ... and I want my own reality to be supreme[2], and if I don't like it ... Billy?[1], and it's hard, but ...[2], and ... "Mikey, go down upon your marrow-bones, and scrub a kitchen pavement -"[1], and if I don't like it ... Billy?[2], and, oh, okay ... Christ[1], and ... "Mikey, go down upon your marrow-bones, and scrub a kitchen pavement -"[2], and ... "Or break stones like an old pauper, in all kinds of weather"[1], and, oh, okay ... Christ[2], and, yeah, FFS! ... I ain't doing that ... thanks, Billy![1], and ... "Or break stones like an old pauper, in all kinds of weather"[2], and ... ha, ha, ha![1], and, yeah, FFS! ... I ain't doing that ... thanks, Billy![2], and my mentor ... he's been a big help to me[1], and ... ha, ha, ha![2], and a lifesaver![1], and my mentor ... he's been a big help to me[2], and that dream, man, wow! ... still can't get over it[1], and a lifesaver![2], and, well, my poem ...[1], and that dream, man, wow! ... still can't get over it[2], and, oh! ... 156 lines, actually ... Where did the new line come from???[1], and, well, my poem ...[2], and my imagination, silly[1], and, oh! ... 156 lines, actually ... Where did the new line come from???[2], and, ha uh ha ... don't worry about it, kooks[1], and my imagination, silly[2], and look at me![1], and, ha uh ha ... don't worry about it, kooks[2], and if you haven't already guessed ... I'm an artist! ... So, let me do what I want[1], and look at me![2], and ... what I think is best[1], and if you haven't already guessed ... I'm an artist! ... So, let me do what I want[2], and listen to me ...[1], and ... what I think is best[2], and I get a feeling of great power from my poem - which is essential[1], and listen to me ...[2], and it's helping me hold on to life[1], and I get a feeling of great power from my poem - which is essential[2], and dear dear dear life[1], and it's helping me hold on to life[2], and by my fingers ... and the cold world is biting my fingers ... but I have fingers of iron![1], and dear dear dear life[2], and ... iron - !!![1], and by my fingers ... and the cold world is biting my fingers ... but I have fingers of iron![2], and before I leave for the land of the Owlman ... maybe I'll send my poem to Poetry Review[1], and ... iron - !!![2], and with a couple of smaller poems, yes[1], and before I leave for the land of the Owlman ... maybe I'll send my poem to Poetry Review[2], and, well ... it will give me hope ... maybe ... on the cliffs ... on the beaches ... and in the lanes[1], and with a couple of smaller poems, yes[2], and ... a poetic warrior![1], and, well ... it will give me hope ... maybe ... on the cliffs ... on the beaches ... and in the lanes[2], and I must ...[1], and ... a poetic warrior![2], and fight, fight ... everywhere, you dig?[1], and I must ...[2], and, oh ... hello, poetry fans[3], and fight, fight ... everywhere, you dig?[2], and I've been making small changes to my BIG poem[3], and there's no rest ...[3], and after the exhaustion, after you've recovered ... you've got to go back, oh yes, and look again[3], and unless ... you're not really serious[3], and ... are you?[3], and, me, me, me ...[3], and I'm just saying ... ... ...[3], and, listen ... I seriously want to fight the chaos of the cold world ... and I want my own reality to be supreme[3], and it's hard, but ...[3], and if I don't like it ... Billy?[3], and ... "Mikey, go down upon your marrow-bones, and scrub a kitchen pavement -"[3], and, oh, okay ... Christ[3], and ... "Or break stones like an old pauper, in all kinds of weather"[3], and, yeah, FFS! ... I ain't doing that ... thanks, Billy![3], and ... ha, ha, ha![3], and my mentor ... he's been a big help to me[3], and a lifesaver![3], and that dream, man, wow! ... still can't get over it[3], and, well, my poem ...[3], and, oh! ... 156 lines, actually ... Where did the new line come from???[3], and my imagination, silly[3], and, ha uh ha ... don't worry about it, kooks[3], and look at me![3], and if you haven't already guessed ... I'm an artist! ... So, let me do what I want[3], and ... what I think is best[3], and listen to me ...[3], and I get a feeling of great power from my poem - which is essential[3], and it's helping me hold on to life[3], and dear dear dear life[3], and by my fingers ... and the cold world is biting my fingers ... but I have fingers of iron![3], and ... iron - !!![3], and before I leave for the land of the Owlman ... maybe I'll send my poem to Poetry Review[3], and with a couple of smaller poems, yes[3], and, well ... it will give me hope ... maybe ... on the cliffs ... on the beaches ... and in the lanes[3], and ... a poetic warrior![3], and I must ...[3], and fight, fight ... everywhere, you dig?[3], and

And, oh ... hello, poetry fans[1], and I've been making small changes to my BIG poem[1], and, oh ... hello, poetry fans[2], and there's no rest ...[1], and I've been making small changes to my BIG poem[2], and after the exhaustion, after you've recovered ... you've got to go back, oh yes, and look again[1], and there's no rest ...[2], and unless ... you're not really serious[1], and after the exhaustion, after you've recovered ... you've got to go back, oh yes, and look again[2], and ... are you?[1], and unless ... you're not really serious[2], and, me, me, me ...[1], and ... are you?[2], and I'm just saying ... ... ...[1], and, me, me, me ...[2], and, listen ... I seriously want to fight the chaos of the cold world ... and I want my own reality to be supreme[1], and I'm just saying ... ... ...[2], and it's hard, but ...[1], and, listen ... I seriously want to fight the chaos of the cold world ... and I want my own reality to be supreme[2], and if I don't like it ... Billy?[1], and it's hard, but ...[2], and ... "Mikey, go down upon your marrow-bones, and scrub a kitchen pavement -"[1], and if I don't like it ... Billy?[2], and, oh, okay ... Christ[1], and ... "Mikey, go down upon your marrow-bones, and scrub a kitchen pavement -"[2], and ... "Or break stones like an old pauper, in all kinds of weather"[1], and, oh, okay ... Christ[2], and, yeah, FFS! ... I ain't doing that ... thanks, Billy![1], and ... "Or break stones like an old pauper, in all kinds of weather"[2], and ... ha, ha, ha![1], and, yeah, FFS! ... I ain't doing that ... thanks, Billy![2], and my mentor ... he's been a big help to me[1], and ... ha, ha, ha![2], and a lifesaver![1], and my mentor ... he's been a big help to me[2], and that dream, man, wow! ... still can't get over it[1], and a lifesaver![2], and, well, my poem ...[1], and that dream, man, wow! ... still can't get over it[2], and, oh! ... 156 lines, actually ... Where did the new line come from???[1], and, well, my poem ...[2], and my imagination, silly[1], and, oh! ... 156 lines, actually ... Where did the new line come from???[2], and, ha uh ha ... don't worry about it, kooks[1], and my imagination, silly[2], and look at me![1], and, ha uh ha ... don't worry about it, kooks[2], and if you haven't already guessed ... I'm an artist! ... So, let me do what I want[1], and look at me![2], and ... what I think is best[1], and if you haven't already guessed ... I'm an artist! ... So, let me do what I want[2], and listen to me ...[1], and ... what I think is best[2], and I get a feeling of great power from my poem - which is essential[1], and listen to me ...[2], and it's helping me hold on to life[1], and I get a feeling of great power from my poem - which is essential[2], and dear dear dear life[1], and it's helping me hold on to life[2], and by my fingers ... and the cold world is biting my fingers ... but I have fingers of iron![1], and dear dear dear life[2], and ... iron - !!![1], and by my fingers ... and the cold world is biting my fingers ... but I have fingers of iron![2], and before I leave for the land of the Owlman ... maybe I'll send my poem to Poetry Review[1], and ... iron - !!![2], and with a couple of smaller poems, yes[1], and before I leave for the land of the Owlman ... maybe I'll send my poem to Poetry Review[2], and, well ... it will give me hope ... maybe ... on the cliffs ... on the beaches ... and in the lanes[1], and with a couple of smaller poems, yes[2], and ... a poetic warrior![1], and, well ... it will give me hope ... maybe ... on the cliffs ... on the beaches ... and in the lanes[2], and I must ...[1], and ... a poetic warrior![2], and fight, fight ... everywhere, you dig?[1], and I must ...[2], and, oh ... hello, poetry fans[3], and fight, fight ... everywhere, you dig?[2], and I've been making small changes to my BIG poem[3], and there's no rest ...[3], and after the exhaustion, after you've recovered ... you've got to go back, oh yes, and look again[3], and unless ... you're not really serious[3], and ... are you?[3], and, me, me, me ...[3], and I'm just saying ... ... ...[3], and, listen ... I seriously want to fight the chaos of the cold world ... and I want my own reality to be supreme[3], and it's hard, but ...[3], and if I don't like it ... Billy?[3], and ... "Mikey, go down upon your marrow-bones, and scrub a kitchen pavement -"[3], and, oh, okay ... Christ[3], and ... "Or break stones like an old pauper, in all kinds of weather"[3], and, yeah, FFS! ... I ain't doing that ... thanks, Billy![3], and ... ha, ha, ha![3], and my mentor ... he's been a big help to me[3], and a lifesaver![3], and that dream, man, wow! ... still can't get over it[3], and, well, my poem ...[3], and, oh! ... 156 lines, actually ... Where did the new line come from???[3], and my imagination, silly[3], and, ha uh ha ... don't worry about it, kooks[3], and look at me![3], and if you haven't already guessed ... I'm an artist! ... So, let me do what I want[3], and ... what I think is best[3], and listen to me ...[3], and I get a feeling of great power from my poem - which is essential[3], and it's helping me hold on to life[3], and dear dear dear life[3], and by my fingers ... and the cold world is biting my fingers ... but I have fingers of iron![3], and ... iron - !!![3], and before I leave for the land of the Owlman ... maybe I'll send my poem to Poetry Review[3], and with a couple of smaller poems, yes[3], and, well ... it will give me hope ... maybe ... on the cliffs ... on the beaches ... and in the lanes[3], and ... a poetic warrior![3], and I must ...[3], and fight, fight ... everywhere, you dig?[3], and

And, oh ... hello, poetry fans[1], and I've been making small changes to my BIG poem[1], and, oh ... hello, poetry fans[2], and there's no rest ...[1], and I've been making small changes to my BIG poem[2], and after the exhaustion, after you've recovered ... you've got to go back, oh yes, and look again[1], and there's no rest ...[2], and unless ... you're not really serious[1], and after the exhaustion, after you've recovered ... you've got to go back, oh yes, and look again[2], and ... are you?[1], and unless ... you're not really serious[2], and, me, me, me ...[1], and ... are you?[2], and I'm just saying ... ... ...[1], and, me, me, me ...[2], and, listen ... I seriously want to fight the chaos of the cold world ... and I want my own reality to be supreme[1], and I'm just saying ... ... ...[2], and it's hard, but ...[1], and, listen ... I seriously want to fight the chaos of the cold world ... and I want my own reality to be supreme[2], and if I don't like it ... Billy?[1], and it's hard, but ...[2], and ... "Mikey, go down upon your marrow-bones, and scrub a kitchen pavement -"[1], and if I don't like it ... Billy?[2], and, oh, okay ... Christ[1], and ... "Mikey, go down upon your marrow-bones, and scrub a kitchen pavement -"[2], and ... "Or break stones like an old pauper, in all kinds of weather"[1], and, oh, okay ... Christ[2], and, yeah, FFS! ... I ain't doing that ... thanks, Billy![1], and ... "Or break stones like an old pauper, in all kinds of weather"[2], and ... ha, ha, ha![1], and, yeah, FFS! ... I ain't doing that ... thanks, Billy![2], and my mentor ... he's been a big help to me[1], and ... ha, ha, ha![2], and a lifesaver![1], and my mentor ... he's been a big help to me[2], and that dream, man, wow! ... still can't get over it[1], and a lifesaver![2], and, well, my poem ...[1], and that dream, man, wow! ... still can't get over it[2], and, oh! ... 156 lines, actually ... Where did the new line come from???[1], and, well, my poem ...[2], and my imagination, silly[1], and, oh! ... 156 lines, actually ... Where did the new line come from???[2], and, ha uh ha ... don't worry about it, kooks[1], and my imagination, silly[2], and look at me![1], and, ha uh ha ... don't worry about it, kooks[2], and if you haven't already guessed ... I'm an artist! ... So, let me do what I want[1], and look at me![2], and ... what I think is best[1], and if you haven't already guessed ... I'm an artist! ... So, let me do what I want[2], and listen to me ...[1], and ... what I think is best[2], and I get a feeling of great power from my poem - which is essential[1], and listen to me ...[2], and it's helping me hold on to life[1], and I get a feeling of great power from my poem - which is essential[2], and dear dear dear life[1], and it's helping me hold on to life[2], and by my fingers ... and the cold world is biting my fingers ... but I have fingers of iron![1], and dear dear dear life[2], and ... iron - !!![1], and by my fingers ... and the cold world is biting my fingers ... but I have fingers of iron![2], and before I leave for the land of the Owlman ... maybe I'll send my poem to Poetry Review[1], and ... iron - !!![2], and with a couple of smaller poems, yes[1], and before I leave for the land of the Owlman ... maybe I'll send my poem to Poetry Review[2], and, well ... it will give me hope ... maybe ... on the cliffs ... on the beaches ... and in the lanes[1], and with a couple of smaller poems, yes[2], and ... a poetic warrior![1], and, well ... it will give me hope ... maybe ... on the cliffs ... on the beaches ... and in the lanes[2], and I must ...[1], and ... a poetic warrior![2], and fight, fight ... everywhere, you dig?[1], and I must ...[2], and, oh ... hello, poetry fans[3], and fight, fight ... everywhere, you dig?[2], and I've been making small changes to my BIG poem[3], and there's no rest ...[3], and after the exhaustion, after you've recovered ... you've got to go back, oh yes, and look again[3], and unless ... you're not really serious[3], and ... are you?[3], and, me, me, me ...[3], and I'm just saying ... ... ...[3], and, listen ... I seriously want to fight the chaos of the cold world ... and I want my own reality to be supreme[3], and it's hard, but ...[3], and if I don't like it ... Billy?[3], and ... "Mikey, go down upon your marrow-bones, and scrub a kitchen pavement -"[3], and, oh, okay ... Christ[3], and ... "Or break stones like an old pauper, in all kinds of weather"[3], and, yeah, FFS! ... I ain't doing that ... thanks, Billy![3], and ... ha, ha, ha![3], and my mentor ... he's been a big help to me[3], and a lifesaver![3], and that dream, man, wow! ... still can't get over it[3], and, well, my poem ...[3], and, oh! ... 156 lines, actually ... Where did the new line come from???[3], and my imagination, silly[3], and, ha uh ha ... don't worry about it, kooks[3], and look at me![3], and if you haven't already guessed ... I'm an artist! ... So, let me do what I want[3], and ... what I think is best[3], and listen to me ...[3], and I get a feeling of great power from my poem - which is essential[3], and it's helping me hold on to life[3], and dear dear dear life[3], and by my fingers ... and the cold world is biting my fingers ... but I have fingers of iron![3], and ... iron - !!![3], and before I leave for the land of the Owlman ... maybe I'll send my poem to Poetry Review[3], and with a couple of smaller poems, yes[3], and, well ... it will give me hope ... maybe ... on the cliffs ... on the beaches ... and in the lanes[3], and ... a poetic warrior![3], and I must ...[3], and fight, fight ... everywhere, you dig?[3], and